Negative Critique

The only problems were pretty small. I had very few waterspots and they came out very small. The most noticeable came out on negatives 23 and 24.

I think that most of my pictures came out really badb but I think that the compostion on my negative number 23. The frame is almost completley filled and the main point of attention is right in the center.

I think that might next best picture compostion wise is is number 21. The frame isn't completly filled but right in the center what I think is the point of attention is almost completely in the center and in the picture the emotion on Harrison's face is really nice and makes me happy.